People often say that they want to travel and get away from
home, but what if once you traveled you could not return home? This is the
basis of exile. Never returning and being completely barred from your native
land that you call home. Edward Said says that, “Exile is strangely compelling
to think about but terrible to experience,” but he also says that it can be “potent,
even enriching”. This idea of exile is experienced dramatically by one of the characters
in the book The Poisonwood Bible by
Barbara Kingsolver named Adah who is both alienated from her home but also
finds that she is enriched by the struggles that she experiences.
Adah is a
young girl that lives with her family that is very religious and follows the
Christian faith very closely. She also has a mental condition that doesn’t
allow her to use the left side of her body at all. This means that she is
constantly watched and cared for by her family. This all changes when the
family is “exiled” to the Congo when they go on a mission trip. While they are
there the village is attacked by ants and Adah has trouble getting away from
them because of her limp. While struggling to save herself, Adah is left by her
family. Adah is not only alienated from her native land at this point but she
is also alienated from the family that she thought cared for her.
Even before
she was exiled Adah decided that she didn’t want to talk unless it was an
emergency because she was always more keen on observing what was happening
around her than actually involving herself. This starts to change when Adah
becomes “enriched” through the daunting struggles that she must overcome while
exiled from her home. She becomes enriched while the village is under attack by
ants and she realizes that she wants to actually save herself and do something for
herself. At this moment Adah decides that she may no longer want to be the
observer that she once was in her native land. The experience that Adah goes
through changes her entire mentality so much that she eventually overcomes her
handicaps that she has and decides that she wants to study science and get
involved with the way the world works around her.
While being
exiled from her home and forced to live somewhere else, Adah overcomes
strenuous challenges that have both enriched her mentality and alienated her
from not only her home but also her family. In the novel, The Poisonwood Bible by Barbara Kingsolver we can truly understand
what is being said about exile by the Palestinian literary theorist Edward Said.
Alienation from one’s native land and enrichment of oneself is what truly can
be expected from exile.
Hey Jacob! I feel that the opening and closing paragraphs were your strong points with your thesis and your opening question. I feel that in the middle of the essay it became a little repetitive and was a little bit too sumarized. Also I think you could have went a little deeper into your examples in how Adahs struggels made her change. However, I think you answered the prompt effectively and established a well written essay. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Shailynn. Maybe focus more on how she was alienated and enriched rather than just stating she was after a brief summary. Most readers will have read the Poisonwood Bible or whatever text you use so you dont have to re-tell the plot just get to the point. Other than that you had a great thesis and intro capturing the reader.
ReplyDeleteOverall I really liked your essay. Your introductory paragraph was strong and straight to the point. I would say to add another quote or two in the body paragraphs to support your thesis. Another thing is to maybe vary your sentence length, but other than that i enjoyed your essay.
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